I took a crowbar to the moment
And prised it open

From the space, thoughts came streaming out
Some stung me in the face
Others brushed against me gently.
I let them pass
and concentrated on watching the space.


  1. timethief says:

    I don`t really like this – I love it!


    1. Thanks. You had me going for a moment… until I got to the end if the sentence 🙂


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