Moment

I took a crowbar to the moment
And prised it open

From the space, thoughts came streaming out
Some stung me in the face
Others brushed against me gently.
I let them pass
and concentrated on watching the space.

2 Comments

  1. timethief says:
    July 5, 2014 at 5:34 pm

    I don`t really like this – I love it!

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    1. David Bennett says:
      July 5, 2014 at 7:35 pm

      Thanks. You had me going for a moment… until I got to the end if the sentence 🙂

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      Reply

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