Moment

On July 1, 2014July 1, 2014 By David BennettIn Personal

I took a crowbar to the moment
And prised it open

From the space, thoughts came streaming out
Some stung me in the face
Others brushed against me gently.
I let them pass
and concentrated on watching the space.

2 thoughts on “Moment”

timethief

I don`t really like this – I love it!

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July 5, 2014 at 5:34 pm Reply
1. David Bennett
  
  Thanks. You had me going for a moment… until I got to the end if the sentence 🙂
  
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  July 5, 2014 at 7:35 pm Reply

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